Developmental Edit Examples
See Twig In Action
Wondering what a developmental edit from Twig actually looks like? Below are real examples of Twig's developmental editing across fiction, memoir, short fiction, and nonfiction so you can see exactly how Twig can guide your revision.
Note: These examples use public domain masterpieces that need no improvement. They're here simply to show you what a Twig developmental edit looks like in practice, not to suggest these texts require editing.
Frankenstein
by Mary Shelley
Explore Twig's approach to atmosphere, narrative structure, literary devices, and philosophical themes in this first-ever horror and science fiction novel.
Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass
by Frederick Douglass
Twig works for memoir too. Here's a classic example that explores observational detail, historical context, and personal voice.
The Prince
by Niccolo Machiavelli
Twig can also evaluate nonfiction books and their argument structure, clarity, persuasive strategy, and practical application.
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